Blog: From: the Heart/Love: the Mind
I had the honor of doing a peer review of the Digital Story
for Elizabeth Peterson (my fellow New Media Tools classmate at Full Sail
University) using the RISE Model for Peer Feedback. I really enjoyed watching
her video and learning more about her journey from where she once was, to where
she is, and where she is on her way to! Please check out her blog at the link
above and also watch the video before you dive into the review.
Reflection
I really respect how you were very open, honest, and detailed
with your story. I know that it takes a lot of courage to speak on very
emotional subjects and events in your past. The positive thing though is that
those things make us who we are today. You talked about your marriage that you
went into very young and how much you learned from that going into your current
relationship. I can see that the motivation from your loved one encouraged you
to pursue your dreams. This really makes me want to take a moment to maybe get
more personal with my story. I also enjoyed seeing all your very captivating
photos. I feel that they give the viewer a closer look into your personality.
Inquiry
When you speak of your current relationship, would you say
that was the turning point in your life that guided your decision to pursue an
education at Full Sail? In your video it seems that with his support it really
motivated you to make a change for the better. Even though it was you who took
the step towards your new future, his support and positivity seemed to give you
the boost you needed to take that step and I think that is absolutely awesome.
Suggestion
Your video was very detailed with great photography. The
only thing I could think of to suggest is maybe more pictures of you when you
were younger at the beginning of your video. You talked a little about being
homeschooled and some of your time in elementary and middle school and would
have been cool to see some photos of your life during that time.
Elevate
Maybe you could also expand the story at the end and talk
more about your experience since starting the MCBS program at Full Sail and
also where do you expect it to take you. You could talk about some of the
career opportunities that you are looking to venture in to after you graduate
and some things like that. Again your video was already very detailed and full
of great visuals and these could help expand more on your story.
Again it was a pleasure to review your digital story and I
hope that my feedback can give you a little assistance as you go in to revise
your final project.
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